cool stuff
It sounds like it could be a track from the ST-Anger demos if that means anything to you, (thats kind of a good thing, it just needs some focus. after around 1:50 its changed and got interesting, trust me, Im one to write epic instrumentles but after some harsh feed back of the same nature I dicided that its time to stop boring non-musicians and do some vocals (they just do not get instrumentals or have the attentions span or something,) Anyways this is a cool song and I hope my review helped, I know how fun it is to have someone critic your work, so I hope you do the same with mine, the link is below. your song has alot of potential, keep it up and dip your toes into some vocals, trust me, its scary at first but well worth, so far no one has made fun of my vocal attempts on my new song. everyone is nice around here.
So please check out my new song, download, and spread it around to anyone you know that digs cool music.
Thanks,
Jesse
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n /349149